
This is a brilliant suspense story! The tension builds perfectly as Melanie’s paranoia escalates, leading her — and us — down a path of questions about her own mind and safety. The reveal about carbon dioxide poisoning is unexpected yet plausible, adding an eerie layer that’s grounded in reality. Ron’s concern and eventual support provide a warm, stabilizing influence, which rounds out the story beautifully.
Your use of sensory details, like the smell of burning toast or the creak of an old apartment, really pulls readers into Melanie’s deteriorating world. The way you weave in her fascination with true crime as a potential factor in her confusion is a clever touch, and the notes turning out to be her own under the effects of CO2 deprivation is the perfect twist.
The additional story teaser at the end for Trent’s story is intriguing too! It would draw readers into another layer of mystery. This story really nails the suspense while maintaining a sympathetic, relatable protagonist.
DEVASTATING NEWS ON TRUMP LEAVES …
Former President Donald Trump released a brief health report from his doctor, Dr. Bruce Aronwald, asserting that his health is “excellent” and noting weight loss attributed to an “improved diet” and regular exercise.
However, the report lacks critical specifics, such as Trump’s weight, blood pressure, cholesterol levels, prescriptions, and the exact amount of weight lost.
Historically, Trump’s health reports have been vague, often including exaggerated claims, such as being the “healthiest individual ever elected to the presidency,” while omitting important details. In contrast, President Biden provides more comprehensive health reports, though they have not fully alleviated concerns about his age and overall health.
Both Trump and Biden face scrutiny regarding their capability to serve another term due to their age, with polls indicating voter concerns about their fitness for the presidency. Trump has particularly emphasized his cognitive test results as evidence of his mental acuity.
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